Learning
Matters Day
Milton/Alpharetta Cluster 10/25/2006
Online Essay Scoring Resources
From On Target Online
Presentation.
The resources below have been created by Greg Ott for use with his students when they write to prompts that will be scored using the Online Essay Scoring System offered by through our textbook agreement with Holt. Teachers visiting this site are welcome to download and modify these handouts for use in their own classrooms. These handouts can provide a framework for using the system and can be customized for individual conditions and expectations. Greg always appreciates hearing from teachers who find these materials useful. Contact information can be found at the bottom of this page.
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Handouts for The Dinner Party Literary Analysis Essay. This prompt can be found by accessing the Writing About Literature prompts. The handouts below are used as students develop their responses to The Dinner Party in the Writing About Literature section of the Online Essay Scoring System. I post most of them on my website as students use them in the development of their essays. This enables them to print out additional copies of everything they have been handed or have worked on in class. Read
The Dinner Party by Mona Gardner Literary
Analysis Essay Assignment Graphic
Organizer. Introductions and
Conclusions Holistic
and Analytic Evaluation Rubrics Student
Model For Scoring Practice Literary
Analysis Essay Scoring Record Online
Essay Scoring Grading Procedures Rough
Draft Checklist - Color Coded Peer
Feedback and Personal
Evolution Sheet Lorax
Model Essay - Color Coded |
Student Models
Written in response to Under the Rice Moon
This story was used in class to model the Online Essay scoring process. The examples below demonstrate student responses to the story representing three different scoring levels for revisions written in response to the feedback generated by the model "2" paper. Students may find that examining the evolution of this paper towards a score of "4" may help them revise their own papers on The Dinner Party. This process can be duplicated for any of the online essay prompts. Read
Under the Rice Moon by Rhiannon Puck. Student
Model Response - Score 2 Student
Model Response - Score 3 Student
Model Response - Score 4 |
| Persuasive
Essay Handouts Many of the handouts for the Writing About Lit paper on the left can be modified to serve this paper. The handouts above used for modeling the use of the online feedback can be easily modified for this paper by simply inserting a persuasive essay that is modified to score at the three levels. |
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Holistic and Analytic Evaluation Rubrics One stop shopping for all of the feedback generated by the Holt Online Essay Scoring System. Handouts for the Persuasive Essay and the Writing about Literature essay can be accessed within the other sections of this page. |
Holt Online Resources Teacher Support Page Model Bank
This page and these writing resources have been designed by me (Greg Ott) for the use of my students at Northwestern Middle School in Alpharetta Georgia in their efforts to respond to feedback generated by Holt Online Learning resources. Visitors are welcome to use these materials and/or this site to enhance their own use of the Holt Online Learning resources. I am always interested in the successful use of these materials and am likewise interested in suggested improvements. Please direct questions and/or comments to me at ottg@fulton.k12.ga.us . Thank you for stopping by. Return to Greg Ott's Homepage