After you have listened to the essay, read over it carefully and respond to the questions below. If you find glaring typos or errors, you can circle them, but your job is NOT to grade or fix grammar errors – you are reviewing the writing and providing feedback on how to revise.
Is the essay one that is developed by description?
If no, explain to the writer what seems to be missing or off.
In a sentence, tell the writer what you believe they are describing in the essay.
In a sentence, tell the writer what you believe to be their main idea or argument.
In the essay, underline your favorite line.
What passage or area would best benefit from revision? You can mark it in the text. Provide the author with at least one suggestion that might help improve the piece. (Again, try to focus on something other than grammar.)
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